Wow!!! This is breathtaking poem, it is so effective and you created superb rhythm. Simply amazing, I like everything about it, emotions, atmosphere and flow are excellent.

Okay, wow! first let me say that this has to be one of the best poems on this site! i seriously loved this poem, i even added it to my favorites. like wow. i loved the rhyming in it and what it was about cause i can definitely relate to it, it was just simply wonderful. i tried to nominate it for the weekly contest but it wont let me =[ grrr.
but anyway you did a great job on writing it!!! 5/5!!

~Kristina