by RaspberryPoetic Aug 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Whose dream led you to entering mine? |
by bacha
I loved it very very much its a really great poem no doubts it was also very touching :):) |
by awww
Love your vocabulary.. expression was good.. it captured me and succumbed me into thought.. just one thing though.. i love what you said in your ending but you could fix it.. kinda distracting when i suddenly see a long line and it threw me off a bit.. other than that.. 5/5 |