by I Seem to be the Heartless Aug 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Girls must fall over you |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Very well written. I like it flowed very well and I like the way you put it. Keep it up! |
by Marc Ortiz
It's a very good acrostic poem. It's really hard to flow in this kind of poetry but I think the flow was okay, well done. |