by Jenni Marie
I love the mataphors and similies you use in this, it makes it all the more effective...the emotion and depth in this are overwhelming, and while relatively short you've manaaged to pack so much into those words...beautifully done. |
by Lisa
Very good poem,keep it up hun |
by darkenlight1
I've never been cheated on but this is a great poem |
by Shauna
Geez.. guys are complete jerks!! You get rid of his memory..he's not worth it! |
by Jenna
I really like this! its very good! it sucks to be cheated on. my ex cheated on my w/ a guy...yes a guy! it hurt so much, but you'll get through. Keep up the great work. && thanks for your comments. |
by Kris
VERY GOOD POEM! |
Im sorry about your ex. :[[ |
by dora
Hey hun lot of emotion in this poem.. very sad =( hope ur oriite. stay strong uve expressed urself well. xx |
by Spirit
All but the last verse apply to me. me and my boyfriens broke up & i felt usless. but thankfully he didn't cheat on me. |
First off, great poem, as...im sure all your others are as well ^^ all the quotes I have read and poems you are a very good writer, you have a gift. ^^ but second of all, don't you worry about him ^^ everything get better, I know it hurts but, you will live, don't let life get you down eles it wont let you get back up ^^ |