I agree with both Serendib and Hellon, this poem is very nicely written. Great imagery and use of words.

Awwwwwww. it touched me the deepest part of love. the part where i have saved some old lost love memories. and after reading this poem my those inside feelings awakep and flew in the shape of my tears. and i cried after reading your poem. the first stanza realy was nice. you have great great talent. i love you all poems.
i will give 5 not becasue you are my freind. but beacause you deserve it.
5/5

Whoah
This poem is really amazing!
So much depth.Sadness.

"I look around to find but darkness
Like the corners of my soul
Trashed and torn I crumble here
Never to see the sun"

5/5

A very deep poem.
Your sadness is really clear.
It was beautiful to read.
Take care

This poem reflects alot of meaning behind it. sometimes we wait for all the lifetime of our loved one but when they come, they dont found us.

the mystry of love is so hard sometimes to understand. only a person who has true love inside can expaling the things you wrote here. welldone

That one went deep, sometimes everyone feels that way. but nevertheless, good write... (b'.')b