Comments : I've Done It Again

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I think you forced the rhyming a bit, it is ok you not every line rhymes!
    flow was a little bumpy
    but i enjoyed it it was sad.
    well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Nice constructive comment from rose. very nice.
    umm i dont know i didn't understand this one as good as the last two. hmm but very well written as always lady!!
    much love
    lindsay-doo