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by Rose not your average
I think you forced the rhyming a bit, it is ok you not every line rhymes! flow was a little bumpy but i enjoyed it it was sad. well written!
by Lindsay
Nice constructive comment from rose. very nice. umm i dont know i didn't understand this one as good as the last two. hmm but very well written as always lady!! much love lindsay-doo