I have shivers now, reading this means a lot to me as i miss my gran too. i am sorry that you were hurt and had to go through this. however i am glad you had good times to rememebr also. your poem is very moving, reaches out with such sad feelings.
your gran will be reading this and saying she loves you honey - she will be watching over you and she is forever in your heart xxxxx

If she were still alive, I know this poem would make her proud. It's sad and touching, and even though I haven't lost my grand-ma, I've lost my grand-father, and I know how it feels. Really good poem!!!

Capitalize the I's.

I love this, I think it's more because it's longer than your usual.
The flow was a bit off here and there, but you sill made the long lines work together.

Keep it up dear.

This is I guess my favourite poem of you, i like this write because your not only describing the good memories but also the sad and maybe even the more painfuller memories. Indeed sometimes life is just not that perfect, a beautiful written tragic rememberance of a grandmother.
I'm sorry for your loss, but thank you for sharing it with us.

5/5

xo angelique