This is a really good write.. It flowed really well and you can feel the emotions you put into it.. very good job.. 5/5

Very nice poem with true quality and meaning. 5/5 for the nice descriptions and the cohesive content :)

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Very nice poem...sometimes all life leaves is your own thoughts..that tends to happen...

the flow is great on this poem.nice job.5/5

I liked the subject matter. However, the poem seems very rough and the flow was unsteady and caused me to lose pace and, subsequently, lose the full emotion you were trying to convey. Thanks for the read

That poem wasnt clear to me at first until i read it again and it just made me think i really like it, the way its understated but yet meaningful enough to not leave your mind!!

This is real and i love the way you explain things into detail its so hard sometimes to express what you mean, especially in poetry. So id like to say well done again becuase you are so unique in your writing :D xxx alex xxx