This poem is so descriptive and it makes it that much better, keep up the good work..i really enjoyed reading this!=]

Very unique piece here....

Loved these lines

But yesterday's tears never dried
My broken heart refuses to pound

and I enjoyed your whole 3rd stanza! Great piece. Love the credits you give to Emily Dckinson!
Charisma*

So I write this poem with hope
That I can still live
Not in body, but spirit
In a lesson that to you I'll give.

This was just Indescribable, beyond discription, u are a great poet and i am not to familiar with emily dckinson so ima go check it out thanks for presenting me a great poet but maybe i just found one right now,

take care,
Alvaro

This was an excellent poem , very deep and sad, you express your feelings very well and word choice was lovely, as for the poem well written , great job, can relate , keep it up,, your friend Tracy d 5/5