by Midnight Sun Aug 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A cabin in the meadow |
Beautifully written, I love your work. |
by Gem
"We need no one else |
by oldthings
Aw, beautiful and sweet, I like the way it assoiciates love with the peaceful feeling of being alone and secluded in the wild, becuase really thats what it is, everything and everyone stops existing but that one someone. Wonderful piece, I liked. |
by *Charisma*
Good job again! Great opening...your last stanza (actually the last line of the last stanza) throws the flow a bit off, but other than that it's a very pretty piece! |
I absolutely love how descriptive this is...it draws a clear picture in my mind, this is a great poem!....keep smiling=] |