I absolutely love how descriptive this is...it draws a clear picture in my mind, this is a great poem!....keep smiling=] |
by *Charisma*
Good job again! Great opening...your last stanza (actually the last line of the last stanza) throws the flow a bit off, but other than that it's a very pretty piece! |
by oldthings
Aw, beautiful and sweet, I like the way it assoiciates love with the peaceful feeling of being alone and secluded in the wild, becuase really thats what it is, everything and everyone stops existing but that one someone. Wonderful piece, I liked. |
by Gem
"We need no one else |
Beautifully written, I love your work. |