Aww thats sad Wake. Reminds me when someone i loved left. It was the saddest thing in my life and I swear I thought I would never get over it. I thought my heart would always be broken but time will heal the pain slowly but never fully. Now it seems like every thing seems not to hurt me anymore. The pain made me stronger. Just like a bone, once it breaks it heals itself and makes it stronger but it can always break in another spot. Excellent Poem! 5/5 I want to make a poem something like this ^_^ I wanted to write about a storm I think you are reading my mind ;) lol Keep Writing !!

This was a beautiful poem!
Sad and very emotional.

" I wished you could've been the one
to save me from myself
You said you'd never be gone
but you're just like everybody else. "

My favourite stanza, so sad.
Loved reading this piece.
Take care

I am seriously speechless!!! Thank you for commenting my poem, You said that my poem was good but what about yours....My favorite piece was the following stanza :

I open the windows just
and let the winds kiss in the rain
but squalls plunge in me
all of yesterday's pain.
..I try to live in feign
..of a love unrequited from the start
..but its like trying to calm a storm
..that scarfed around my heart.

I weish you luck within the future!! You should get your poems publish though I wouldnt be surprised if they already where =P
xxxx

..I try to live in feign
..of a love unrequited from the start
..but its like trying to calm a storm
..that scarfed around my heart.

man this is my favorite part! I can relate to this poem. It's so deep! You wouldn't believe how wondeful your poems are. You write what you feel and i can feel it too. It's not reading, it's feeling. Don't ever stop writing man. 5/5 all the way!
**Heather**

I can relate to this poem.
It is so deep, filled with sadness, and excellently written. I like it from the beginning to the end, but my favorite part is:
-When my world comes down,
the pain will slowly fade
or maybe it'll just become numb to the ache
that comes back everyday.-

I like the atmosphere that you created through the piece, it is very effective.

WISH I CUD.. GIVE YA MORE THN 5..lol too good