Comments : Broken

  • 17 years ago

    by Disenchanted

    I liked it, but it really had no rhyming scheme. Unless it was freestyle poetry, but good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by mohamed

    Very beautyful... grt work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Beautiful poem , well penned and very well written , great choice of words and the flow was good, love the way you expressed your feelings and thoughts in this write,,, keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5