I really enjoyed this poem...i dont know...something about it...its one that i consider inspiration for other writings...i gave you a 5

It is really excellently written. Short yet very powerful. You described emotions in just a few words... You created great atmosphere and it is very touching. It deserves 5/5

I can relate to this one. Whole piece is excellently written, so deep and very descriptive. The ending is great and heart- breaking. So many emotions within the words...
Keep writing!

Wow!! I LOVE this. It also reminds me of writers block. "I sit here for hours looking for words in my mind" - very powerful line to start with.
Thank you for your comments.
Happy writing
xxx.

Great poem! I'm certainly going to read your other poems as well... wow, just wow. It reminds me very much of how I feel at times.

-Thanks very much for your comment on my poem! It's always great to get a good review ;) -

Take care, Hope <3

I know this poem is about you and i know that because of our talks but this poem reminds me of writters block not being able to think of any more ideas latlely and times like this suck so ya well i loved it loves.

Wow this poem is amazing, now my favourite. I have not been on here in ages, loads of stuff going on with me and this is a time when writing could really help me but i cant seem to form what i want to get out into words (if that makes sense) i just sit looking from the pen to the blank paper back to pen so i feel annoyed with poetry so i get exactly what you mean from this poem. Made me feel better.

Kelly
xx

Beautiful poem. Poetry is good to express ones feelings. Keep writing and sharing your work with us.