Young love is difficult, just hold your self together if the worst should come around, as many people say there are plenty more fish in the sea, just some are the ones you are looking for :P

onto the poem, :) its a nice long poem, and i must be honest im not fond of long poems but you kept realed in.

Oh hun very cute i like this alot good job its soo good and a lot of ppl can relate!!

Wow thats a long time!! I guess i could relate to you in some way.....except i was the one hurting my fiance:(...i dont know whether you decided what to do or not but i guess i could shed my exsperince on you and hope that it helps.....my advice would be not to give up!!nothing in life comes easy Sometimes we have to work hard for the things we really want in life so that when we do get it we'll appreciate ten times more....Sometimes people need a wake up call....and sometimes its the people we love the most that we hurt us the most....in otherwords i wouldnt give up on him some people take longer to realize what they really have i was one of those people and i thank allah everyday that my fiance didnt give up on me when i hurt him....now were going stronger then ever and i never talked to my ex again because i realized if i kept it up i would lose the most important person in my life and it just wasnt worth the risk thankfully he gave me a second chance.....and even if your boyfriend doesnt come around god forbid....at least you gave it your all besides everything happens for a reason mayb theres someone better out there for you...well anyways i wrote you like a story book lol so im gonna shut up now lol anyways keep up the good work i really enjoy reading your poems and good luck 5/5:)

p.s- dont give up every re;ationship has its struggles hopefully you guys will get through it together!!

I love it you dont have to make it rhyme or flow it just pours out feelings

I LOVE THIS POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK