I'm Here

by Reminders Torture   Aug 17, 2007


You know that I'm here.
Even if everythings about to disappear.
If you feel alone and scared.
After all the things you have bared.

You know that I'll take your hand.
When everythings about to shatter and,
When there is no turning back.
Doesn't matter what you have lacked.

But you know that I'm here for you.
No matter what you did and you do.
You know I'll fight back those fears.
No more pain in those tears.

You know that I'm here.
To fight back all those fears.
Don't be afraid, don't loose hope.
Just be strong and don't say no.

Now that you know I'm here.
After all that had happened.
Don't loose hope, don't be afraid.
Cause you know I'm here for you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Okay, so you want to know your mistakes. It's not Loose that you have in the last two stanzas. It should be lose. Loose is like you loosen your shoelaces. Lose is like you're losing hope in something. Just thought you should know that. Not bad for just starting on this site.
    Keep it up.

  • 5/5

  • Love the poem... keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A great poem that is written perfectly, i really enjoyed it... keep it up

    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

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