Another one great from you, very emotional and greatly written. My favorite stanza is:
-Divine, the chain
Of jointed souls
For such a unity
Seems untold
For this reason
Bondage flails
Lies appear
And all else fails-
I like the atmosphere and the choice of words in this poem a lot.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

This so far is my favorite poem form you it flows well and has a lot of emotion the wording is exhalant.

The flow is perfect! The wording is creative and the whole poem is awesome. I am speechless
love Tara-Kay
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