Italians in Moonlight

There are so many lines throughout this that I really like, they are creative and flow nicely. I also love the title, the title itself draws a picture in my mind.

At first I wasn't sure about your use of the word me in the 1st and 3rd stanza but after reading it a couple times I realized that it adds a nice touch of repetition in a way.

Such a creative piece, the title was catchy, and the poem really did you proud.
a talent is in you, you were given this gift
love Tara-Kay
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Wow, I'm speechless. This piece is so unique and creative, so captivating. You wrote it superbly, every stanza holds a lot of emotions and the imagery in the poem is very vivid, amazingly created.
You have truly great poetic skills.
My favorite stanza is:
-Blue eyes, green eyes, brown
Rivers, confusion, and dark cathedrals
Places that glisten under the moon
It's coming too soon, all too soon
Heartbreak-
^It is so descriptive, great.
5/5 from me

Some good imigary in this poem not my favorite from you but still good.