Some good imigary in this poem not my favorite from you but still good.

Wow, I'm speechless. This piece is so unique and creative, so captivating. You wrote it superbly, every stanza holds a lot of emotions and the imagery in the poem is very vivid, amazingly created.
You have truly great poetic skills.
My favorite stanza is:
-Blue eyes, green eyes, brown
Rivers, confusion, and dark cathedrals
Places that glisten under the moon
It's coming too soon, all too soon
Heartbreak-
^It is so descriptive, great.
5/5 from me

Such a creative piece, the title was catchy, and the poem really did you proud.
a talent is in you, you were given this gift
love Tara-Kay
x

There are so many lines throughout this that I really like, they are creative and flow nicely. I also love the title, the title itself draws a picture in my mind.

At first I wasn't sure about your use of the word me in the 1st and 3rd stanza but after reading it a couple times I realized that it adds a nice touch of repetition in a way.