Dont Cry

by xoxkatrinaxox   Aug 17, 2007


A lil' girl looks at her sis'. She's
got so many cuts all along her arm.
So straight-so purfect. She dosen't
look like her beautiful self.

Her eyes are swollan from cryin
in the deep of the night.Her hair
so knotted and greasy.

But the girl manages to mumble.
To her sissy. sis dont cry
the doctors will make you
better.

Cover ur arms and
nobody will see.wash you're
hair and it will shine again.
Scrub ur eyes and they
will light up a room.

A few days later. The lil
girl walks into the room
and sees red. In panick
she says..sis dont die
I will make you better..
Stop The Blood And You
Might Make It..
Sissy Dont Leave I
Need You..

The sister is lifeless..
her vain is torn into
from a pencil she
found under the
bed.

THIS WAS WRITTEN WITH MY SISTER IN MIND
AND THE FIRST TIME I SAW HER IN THE PLACE SHE
CALLED " HELL" ..MY SISTER DID ALMOST KILL
HER FROM A PENCIL SHE FOUND UNDER THE
BED BUT SHE DIDN'T BECUASE OF ME. THATS WHY
IT HURTS ME SO MUCH THAT WE'RE NOT SO CLOSE
ANYMORE...CUZ MY WORST FEAR MIGHT COME TRUE..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Artistic Fallen Angel

    I really liked this it was beautiful you and your sister may be not as close as you once were but she still loves you. remember that. 5/5! your talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I'm sorry this happened to you and your sister...but the poem that came out of this was beautifully expressed and powerful...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    This is sad :( hope everything tets better!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

    luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow this was an extremly sad poem....but i really liked how you exspressed it....this must have been an extremly hard time for your sister as well as you but im glad to hear that you guys got through it....It also must have felt nice knowing that you saved a life!! well keep up the good work your doing great and thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem...truly appreciated..this poem definetly deserves a 5/5:)