Aww this is a beautiful poem
and im sry this happened to u
very good

Im so sorry this happened to you

This poem is beautiful

Very sad.. but it was written very well

5/5

Keep Smiling xx

Oh my. im so srry. that must be real tough.

Wow this was an extremly sad poem....but i really liked how you exspressed it....this must have been an extremly hard time for your sister as well as you but im glad to hear that you guys got through it....It also must have felt nice knowing that you saved a life!! well keep up the good work your doing great and thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem...truly appreciated..this poem definetly deserves a 5/5:)

ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

luzaN

This is sad :( hope everything tets better!

I'm sorry this happened to you and your sister...but the poem that came out of this was beautifully expressed and powerful...5/5

I really liked this it was beautiful you and your sister may be not as close as you once were but she still loves you. remember that. 5/5! your talented.