Just Like Me

by RobinAnn13   Aug 17, 2007


She sees your smile
she doesn't know it's fake
she thinks you care about her
but you just want to take
her trust into your hands
to get exactly what you want
then you'll drop her too
and go back on the hunt
to find some other pretty girl
and before she has the chance to see
you'll tear her heart in little pieces
just like you did to me

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    The flow seems a little off sometimes , and it should be much more powerful since it's such a short poem . Try upping the vocabulary and adding punctuation . The idea is a really good start , and it's easy to relate to . Good job .. It's not a perfect 5 , but I'll give it to you anyways .