End is not the end

by mohamed   Aug 18, 2007


Let the angels count the last seconds,
let the humanities count its last days,
let the sky crash down to the earth,
let the earth blast into pieces.

there will be no life's left,
there is nothing left to be destroyed,
everything that has been created turned to be ashes,
its when the time takes its final rest.

this may seems to you the end
but believe me its just the beginning
now its time to face the reality
the reality that you created.

the bad will be punished for there doings
good will be rewarded as they were promised
unbelievers this is the time
now there is no turn back...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice vivid tittle and a wonderful poem...
    "this may seems to you the end
    but believe me its just the beginning
    now its time to face the reality
    the reality that you created."
    ^loved that stanza, wonderful, makes you think and wonder, after all we are judged by our actions, and it is our actions that reflect on the lives we lead and the afterlife we're doomed for.

  • 16 years ago

    by JAYJ

    Judgement Day...
    the poem was very powerful
    it makes u think.. it painted a picture in my head thats what i like in a poem ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very nice & well written...5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw , its great mohamed and its powerfull words you write, the flow nice too,you got a gift we can say its a talent to be good poet,well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Nice poem :)

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