Broken Wings (Lira)

Short creative sweet and rhymed perfectly as always my dear another lovely piece to add to your collection

This is a touching and heartfelt piece. Short, but with such powerful emotion and meaning. Good to see you tackling some traditional forms.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

I just have to say again a beautiful piece of work...that why your one of my favorite writers. 5/5 :) thanks for the comment and rating. It really met a lot to me....

This is the best poem i hv read in last so many years. I mean it. Its just like a whisper with a story behind it. Beautifully written dear.

all the best and take care

Cindy ... oh my dear Cindy with such few words you have made my heart thump that extra beat.
Such a heart touching piece.

Treasure that happy memories Cindy ... they get us through even the darkest days.
Much love sweets
Luanne