Cindy, im lucky to be the first one to comment on this lovely poem.
A beautiful heart touching piece written with perfection in lira format .

take care
chavii.

A very beautiful poem 5/5 sensationally written in a way that only you could achieve. wonderfully worded

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Cindy dear, That was so sad.... so emotions that you penned here, even though simply, but you expressed them within beautiful emotions...

Love & Peace.

Bert. ~

Beautiful form and sadly haunting.....you aced this one sis! good job!!!! Love, Deb

Cindy, This poem is excellent...It was really sad and touching...Loved the ending...
Take care

"Falling from my eye a solitary tear"

i love that line...i love the poem itself, short but sweet, and right the point---very well done cindy, i love seeing your formed poetry, keep it up!

Cindy ... oh my dear Cindy with such few words you have made my heart thump that extra beat.
Such a heart touching piece.

Treasure that happy memories Cindy ... they get us through even the darkest days.
Much love sweets
Luanne

This is the best poem i hv read in last so many years. I mean it. Its just like a whisper with a story behind it. Beautifully written dear.

all the best and take care

I just have to say again a beautiful piece of work...that why your one of my favorite writers. 5/5 :) thanks for the comment and rating. It really met a lot to me....

This is a touching and heartfelt piece. Short, but with such powerful emotion and meaning. Good to see you tackling some traditional forms.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Short creative sweet and rhymed perfectly as always my dear another lovely piece to add to your collection