Venomous Poison

I love this. It is short yet excellently expressed. I like the metaphors of this piece and the way you wrote it is truly great. I hate to repeat myself but I have to mention that the fact that you managed to say so much with just two stanzas is really impressive. I can relate to this poem in a way which makes it even more powerful for me. Truly greatly done!

This was very breath-taking, it was again short, but this time it was very well put together, the rhyming was great and never seemed forced, and the flow was smoothe. A well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

Oh wow that was amazing, this piece is a work of art, and i love the title too... very very very good... 5/5

Ooooo i like <333