Remaining Scars

by TillyMariex   Aug 18, 2007


Her life is pointless
full of pain and agony
this knife is hurtful
oh so bloody
you could never imagine
all the tears she's cried
life feels like a rollercoaster
and its forced her along for the ride
she's becoming weak
as she cuts into her vein
she lets it bleed
and absorbs all the pain
this is how her life is
each day is the same
her tears they come and go
but the scars are to remain

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I LOVE THIS POEM!It is going on my favories for sure.It was short but straight to the point.Amazing!100/5 *lol*

    <3Amber

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    Shit this poem is good :)
    well done

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Nice how it rythmed and it all flowed really well and you could understand what you were talking about.

  • 17 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I love this...it's so realistic...i mean, ok I have no clue how to explain what I mean but I really really like this poem. <3 <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Whoa...i love this..amazing poem..very well penned...nice job on this poem..5/5 from me.

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