by TwiztidJuggalette Aug 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She sat there bleeding in so much pain, |
by nikki
This one was so sad. i can't believe this was your fist try at this type of poetry. you did it so well. i loved it. great work, wanna teach me how to write one. 5/5 |
So sad... really well written... and so sad. :( the emotions are strong and the imagery is good. |
by Sherry Lynn
This is sad and heart wrenching. The scenery you displayed here actually leads the imagination and that is a good thing. |
by Adelle
A deep sad heart felt poem you have a lot of talent you did a really good job on this one. 5/5 |
by Wallace
I love triolets, they're my favorite style. And i think you did wonderful with this. The starting sounded off but at the ending it really came into play, excellent job. Great work. It's been a pleasurable read. |