Take a bow, you did an outstanding job, the emotion was deep and strong, the word choice was great, the flow was perfect, well penned, and intresting 5/5

Great poem. I know this type of poetry is difficult to do and you've done it very well. This was so sad and I must commend you on your excellent use of imagery and this was very well written. Great Job! 5/5

-Shannon <3

I really liked this. So deep. I especially like the line where it said he won. Just the way you worded that got to me.
Excellent.

Truely it was a bit confusing but i loved it anyway. i can't say that i've ever been threw something like that but i actually felt it great job.

This is a good poem..sad but good...i enjoyed reading it..even though im not that familiar with the whole troilet writing style... but it sounded great...flowed good and everything so you get a deserved 5/5 from me.

Love triolets really amazing pieces and you pulled this one off pretty well. Liked the meaning behind it you could interpret this any way you like depending on the reader what situation they have been in and on their own personal veiw. Liked the sadness which flowed over this. Word choice simple yet effective. Altogether this deserves a 5/5 ~mel

Hey TwiztidJuggalette
So you did try writing a triolet.
Alright, I don't know if you want honest comments but here it is:
I like the emotions expressed and everything but i think the rhyme scheme is kinda off. A triolet has a scheme of ABaAabAB. But from what i read, i got: ABcAcbAB. Unless you have to pronounce the words a certain way? Not sure. PM me about it.
~ Lainey

I love triolets, they're my favorite style. And i think you did wonderful with this. The starting sounded off but at the ending it really came into play, excellent job. Great work. It's been a pleasurable read.

A deep sad heart felt poem you have a lot of talent you did a really good job on this one. 5/5

This is sad and heart wrenching. The scenery you displayed here actually leads the imagination and that is a good thing.

You have written this poem in such away that the images actually implant themselves n the readers mind.

--Sher

So sad... really well written... and so sad. :( the emotions are strong and the imagery is good.

This one was so sad. i can't believe this was your fist try at this type of poetry. you did it so well. i loved it. great work, wanna teach me how to write one. 5/5