Lost You

by ImNotPerfect20   Aug 18, 2007


I can never trust you,
Because you made me cry!
Making my stomach turn ,
Breaking my heart hurts.

You said I love you !
But it was just a lie,
I can not trust you,
Because you made me cry.

You said I will never leave you.
You made that promise to me,
But in the end my heart split ,
Because you went after her.

It's been so long but I'm still crying,
I bet you were over me the day it happened.
I can not trust you ,
Because you made me cry.

We never talk anymore.
You said we would be friends
I can not trust you
Because you made me cry.

I have just one question for you.
Do you hear that sound?
It's the sound of my heart,
The heart that you broke into two.

Note: I wrote this poem awhile ago.. I could not get it right so thats why i'm putting it up now. I finally got it the way I wanted it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Fair poem, Good work, Nice words...

    oh by the way, who made you cry...

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    To be honest... It was just OK to me...
    I dont think that the flow was very good
    maybe you should touch up some of that

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    The subject was a good one but i didnt feel the poem had any flow or feeling to it, it looks like it good be a very good poem if it was consistant and with more flow not a bad piece for something you wrote ages ago though :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    Sad poem with the potential to have a lot of emotion however this was frown of by the lack of flow in this piece. I’m not trying to offend you however I believe it this will help you to improve.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Very sad ending really liked it it was powerful, I can connect to this poem really well. made memories come back. Very interesting poem, with a lot of emotions. Really great work. 5/5

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