Wonderful poem, very deep, meaningful and excellently written. I like the message that it holds.
Choice of words in the whole piece is amazing and the flow is great, too. The third stanza is my favorite. I like the metaphors used in the poem a lot. Imagery is very vivid and breath-taking.
5/5 from me

Your poems have a magical way of lifting me up from deep despair. Marked to read time and time again. Thanks from the heart!

Wonderful imagery. The words were pieced together perfectly. This was such a meaningful and uplifting piece of poetry. Great read. 5/5

Beautiful, your poems are all so moving and have such profound meaning in them. Once agian great Job 5/5