Quite nice

Very Good! I love this one... 5/5
-Jackie

Rose, that was amazing.
My heart is mad beating!
It was so strong, and effective.
Where do you get your inspiration?

Excellently Penned,
Elaine.

Wow your poem was deep...
excellent job i saw it on the bulletin
great, ur on my favs fo sho!
5/5

This is very emotional,
it's really good actually.
Yet, your flow was off.
I suggest that, you could try a non rhyming poem.
For you could try to find a way to flow your poetry,
then move back to rhyming.
It really improves your emotion,
the flow and keeps the reader hooked in what you want them to see.
It was a bit distracting,
when the flow was a bit off.
But your emotion was still here,
I really enjoyed it.
Great job!

I like the whole idea for a poem, it is very interesting. Anyway, you repeated the word "face" too many times, and some of your rhymes seem forced and typical. I think (that's only my opinion) than you can work on the flow of this poem a little bit more.

Nice poem....i love everything about it...the flow was perfect,the rhyming was great, and just the fact that alot of people sometimes feel this way makes the poem amazing..good job 5/5

I thought it was pretty good. but it could have been better. If you were going to rhyme at all you readlly needed to rhyme throughout the whole thing, because that sort of made the flow a little shaky. And some of the rhyming was very good, it seemed force. But non the less it was a good poem, i give you a 4/5

5/5 I love the flow in this poem

This poem really was amazing. Very sad, but I love it. 5/5

This poem really was amazing. Very sad, but I love it. 5/5

It is very interesting. You have some mistakes but I like the topic. It is original. You could create stronger atmosphere and wording can be a lot better. 4/5

U show alot of emotions .. its very good.. i like this part alot "I try and splash the image away.
Thinking that would make it all ok.
It just reforms.
Into the same face."
i can relate to it cuz sometimes i dont like wht i see..
keep writin

Wow. Beautiful poem, strong write. very powerful 5/5

Too many I's and filler words. And you rate yourself a 4.5 according to one of the threads.....hmmmmm. I think you are being very generous.

This is such a poignant, sad poem - great writing!

The idea was very good, and the imagery was well done. However I would use a more expanded vocabulary next time -- something that makes the reader think about whats being written, instead of straight-forward text.