I am the girl

by LiNa   Aug 18, 2007


Who am i
i am the girl who laughs but really cries beneath the mask
i am the girl with the dreams that wont seem to last
the broken hearts the tragic beatings of a fairy tale ending
iam the girl who fights the world just to breathe
who cant feel her heart or her soul even beating
who stays awake wondering what is life holding
the world is holding her hole life in its hands
i am the girl who falls over backwards for everyone and everything
i am the girl who seems to always smoke to much weed
to wake up every day and not relize were you are
to waking up in someone elses bed everymorning
having no clue how you got there or why
i am the girl who has fallen deep down
the girl who always falls to the ground
never lifted up always feet touching the ground
i am the girl who has let a memory fade away
the memory of the best thing ive ever had that had stayed
but soon got up and walked away just to leave me alone and half bleeding
i am the girl who cutts her wrist and sleeps on the tile of the bathroom floor
i am the girl who has the scars to speak for the actions
i am the girl who has let her love go
i am the girl who pays for these actions everyday
the girl who walks this life lonley and broken
with every scar to explain the oath she has taken to a lonely and forbidden zone
i am the girl who looses her mind
i am the girl who is llike this all the time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Saint

    I'll say this plain and simple, i love it.. excellently done.. 5/5 (n_n)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie

    Gud poem n im flattered that ive changed you hun, i no how u feel

  • 16 years ago

    by sha

    I like this!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow! you have no idea just how much this poem spoke to me. I really enjoyed reading it. The way you expressed yourself was amazing. I'm so glad you commented my poem so I could find this. I'm deff gonna have to add you to my favorites.

    i am the girl who falls over backwards for everyone and everything
    i am the girl who seems to always smoke to much weed
    to wake up every day and not relize were you are
    to waking up in someone elses bed everymorning

    ^^^I loved this part. I lived life like this for so long. I know exactly how you feel. You have a lot of talent as a poet. Plz keep writing. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    I liked this poem. What I would suggest is that u should break it up in2 stanza's so ppl r more willing 2 read it. Cuz personally I was a little hesitate. But overall this was a very good poem. I loved the way that u ended it. The last sentence. I thought that was really good. The whole poem was just very good though.

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