((SPEECHLESS)) Wow. Really emotional. I REALLY like it... 5/5 |
WOW that was absolutely amazing , a wonderful poem , very sad and full of deep feelings , my heart goes out to you, it was a well written poem, great write,, keep ot up, your friend Tracy d 5/5 |
Nicely written lina..i love how you have this very unique style and form to what you write, keep up the great work! |
by heather
Wow, this reminded me a lot of myself. i mean not word4 word but basically. 5/5 |
by Aubrey
OMG I love the poem. |
by joe m durham
Tahts nasty ur good |
Dats a great poem |
by Zelly
Hello, I found a deep connectionbetween your poem, and those of mine. This was truely a wonderful poem!!! |
by Laurenf7
This poem is amazing 5/5! Could really relate to some of it! |
by chances
This is a good poem, i can visual on how the person is feeling and what is going on |
I really enjoyed reading this one. :) |
This is really breathtaking.... wow. none of my poems can even compare to this... wow... thats like the perfect word for it.... juss wow.... 5/5 |
Awesome poem lot of emotion in this one 5/5 |
This is so me except for the cuttin wrists part and insted i have scars on my arms of hearts for how many times i have really been hurt and i love this poem!! |
by heather
Ay girl..i can say im here 4 u..i feel ur emotion in ur words and i love ur freedom 2 express them. really...anytime..u jus wanna tlk2 sum1...im totally here 4 u. ill listen any time. |
Im the same way! I relate 100% && I think this poem was amazing! |
by MiRAy3
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by MyMuse
Wow that was just wonderful and amzing!!! |
This poem was amazing! |
I liked this poem. What I would suggest is that u should break it up in2 stanza's so ppl r more willing 2 read it. Cuz personally I was a little hesitate. But overall this was a very good poem. I loved the way that u ended it. The last sentence. I thought that was really good. The whole poem was just very good though. |