Wow a unique and powerful poem loved the read 5/5

Very powerful piece!! Re-read trying to find my favorite stanza...but the entire piece is just wonderfully written. Great word usage and flow. WOW!!

WOW that was an awesome poem, very deep and sad, a lot of heartfelt feelings in this piece, very well written and the vocabulary was excellent, great job ,, keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

It reminds me on some hip-hop lyrics. I like it very much, topic is great and whole piece is very original. You expressed emotions excellently and this poem truly deserves 5/5

Great poem, very effective. The title is especially captivating and I like the repetition of it at the end of every stanza. You have great wording and atmosphere through the whole piece. The third stanza is my favorite, truly excellently written.
Well done, 5/5 from me

I think in the title it is supose to be "Blood" Not sure though sorry if i'm wrong.

I really loved this piece it was quite interesting and effective. The repetition near the ending of each stanza was great I enjoyed that alot. This whole piece flowed nicely. Well done on creating an amazing poem. ~mel

Wow, a very interesting poem and i must say it was awesome coz it really shows what is currently happening to the world! nice imagination, the chosen words were really great coz it helps to add more vivid and intense atmosphere and emotions. Over all a unique masterpiece!!

This poem is very powerful and unique at the same time...very good=]

Oh wow..strong ending..and i love the title..

the first line immediately drew me in...
the flow was perfect...

another job well done.5/5

That was amazing! Truly Amazing!

The intensity was almost too much to bare, each word tightened the knot that grew within my stomach. The Reptition, was effective.
Your word use strong. And the flow flawless.

Really Enjoyable,
Keep it up
Elaine. 5/5

Great words. All of them makes the poem so filled with emotion. Very good. (-_-)