The way feeling and emotion were described in this poem was amazing. well done w]sweety. i'm sure friend was very touched.

ps.can you please read and comment on some of my poems thank you.x x x tc

I just wrote a poem yesterday always in my eye pleases read it, its similar the way you write is a similar style to mine 5/5

You've done an excellent job at capturing the emotions for this situation. I do believe your friend will be pleased.

She couldn't have picked a better person to write her this poem, you truly went above and beyond, but thats what friends should do. Excellent job babe 5/5 GG23

Awwwww.
thats so sweet sara.
they like broke up? kylie and kris?
or just for now????
this is a really great poem.

Very emotional and powerful! 5/5 And I'm sorry I haven't checked out your poems lately!

This is so sensitive ...the poem is really interesting ...I loved the way u wrote it...U did a great job.
Keep it up:)5/5..