Comments : Pain On Display

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    That was soooo sad.....

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful, truly powerful. I can relate to some parts of this piece. You have a way with words, you put strong, raw emotions in your poems, which touches me every time. Whole poem has great descriptions.
    I like the ending, it rounds up whole poem with great effect.
    Keep writing!