Jeannie
This is so beautiful. Sad but very moving.

But as I stand upon the path
A threshold there to be
"Wrap your arms around my heart
and in heaven remember me".

This stanza is so heartfelt.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

It is a very touching poem.

Jeannie what an incredibly moving poem!

But as I stand upon the path
A threshold there to be
"Wrap your arms around my heart
and in heaven remember me".

^^^
Such a touching ending stanza *wipes tear*
Much love Auntie
Luanne

You should put this on your featured list. I really like this poem. Good job.