by Danielle Apr 28, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My cute little girl |
Hey Dani, So wish i had half your talent! By the way dont wanna be picky and pathetic but wanted to let you know all throughout the poem you have used the word "LITTLE" but on the second to last verse you put "LIL". Just thought id let you know, cos im always making little mistakes and rely on picky people to let me know! |
by RicaLo
That was very powerful and sad, but you wrote it beautifully:) |
by BaybeBlew
Awe...That was so sad. I've never really read anything like that. The worst pain is to have a child taken away from you. Anyways awesome poem. |
by jescelle
you made me cry..... wow youve had a hard life. either that or you really realize true pain. Im touched by the way you added in the mother thing, i almost killed myself once, and that is really how i felt, thank you so much W/B if you can |
by Amy
so sad yet really well written. |