No One Can

by Goran Rahim   Aug 18, 2007


My heart is
Crying alone,
No one can comfort it.
As you are the sources
Of its pain.
If not you,
No one can
Convince it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Very very short but it received the message ^_^.

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Im stunned.

    This was probably you shortest, and yet you still amazed me with your ability to lace that love in there.
    This was beautiful it flowed well, and it was heartfelt.

    I really liked it,
    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Short but yet enough meaning to make it enjoyable..excellent job.5/5

  • Another short yet emotion filled poem, very nicely written and portrayed.

    5/5 once again :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Again amazing. I love these short pieces you have written. Expecially this one.Something about it stabbs at my heart to make me feel what you feel. When i read this the tone that I get from it is sad alone and emotional. Well done on creating such a beautiful poem. ~mel