Flawless In Your Eyes

by Jaime   Aug 19, 2007


When I looked into the mirror today,
All my flaws were looking back.
I'm not perfect; it's just so obvious-
And I'm not sure where I went off track.

The person that I see in that glass,
Shows me all that I am lacking.
But my reflection in your shining eyes,
Sends my mirror's reflection packing.

For when I looked up at your face today,
A new perspective crossed my mind:
In your eyes I am flawless;
In the mirror, my eyes were blind.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    Sweet poem dude!! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    Amost in tears, beautiful:) I shall now go and favourite this. You're an amazing writer

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This was so beautiful and perfect. I wouldn't change a thing about this poem. I loved the first and the last stanza. You really wrote an amazing piece. I could actually imagine someone standing in the mirror and so on. Great write Jaime!

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    Great job =] I love it <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Rania

    Sensational !!!!!!!
    You had me by the first line..
    Excellently worded I Hope this helps others to realize they just need to be themselves !!!!!!!!

    ~ Rania ~

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