omg those poems were amazing! you have so much skill and talent.. where do you come up with all that? keep writing i LOVE your work :) ~*kiki*~

well you wouldn't understand this, unless you read the other 2, so I'm sorry if u didn't, but it's rather a good poem, and i put a lot of work into it! THanks alot for your comments! It means alot guyz

Nice work, too bad they all had to die. It was a good story, a sad one, but a good one. At least they were all back together again, which makes it a little less sad. Keep up thte good work, as for suggestions for what to do next, I have none.

Wth why is my name appearing as David V.

I love this poem, You are truly a master at transferring thoughts and emotins into words.
I always look forward to your work. I have much respect for you artistry.
-David Velazquez

i loved how u did the story from 3 different perspectives. shows how talented u are

try writing about how they are trying to find each other in heaven, its a big heaven you nkow........lol

Omg i read them all i think they're all awesum.i cant wait to see da 4th part!! 5/5 keep writing.love always,faerie