Amazing poem! The rhymes were right on, the flow was perfect and it was very fun to read. Even a 10 year old child could
read this and understand it because it has more of childish story feel to it (dont' take that in a bad way, that is a good
thing) Anybody of any age group could read this and just fall in love with it. It really does create a picture in your mind.
Once again, great job! Leave me 6 titles so i can comment them and i will get to it as soon as possible.