I like this poem! It makes me feel happy inside. It has been a long, long time sice I felt the way you are decribing in your poem.
It sure feels nice to read stuff like this!

5/5 Ingrid
ps: does 'to ache for' mean the same as 'to pity'?

Thank you Ingrid for your kind review, I'm so glad that You like my poetry and that it makes you feel better! No dear, to ache for is the same as longing for and to pity means to feel sorry for. Thanks again doll,

Hugs from Doug

Wow!

Thank you for dropping in and reviewing, I see you're a person of few words, but those words spoke volumns. Glad you liked the poem, fell free to read more. Thanks again.