Awesome! i like it. good job! keep writing and youll get better! good job!!!

Know wut? that wuz good and it didnt suck!!!! so dont be negative!!!! and i kinda know wut you were talking about cuz my best friends brother wuz in jail cuz hes done such stupid stuff, but she still oves him no matter wut. so good job!!! :-)

It was good.worth the time to read

Yes i do agree with bloddy, but you have a bright future ahead of you......4/5 keep goin!

Extremely sweet! XD