Depression

by thedeathrapisattackingyou   Aug 19, 2007


There was a man, who was unhappy
but on the outside, he shows happy.
but one night, he decided, to take a blade

and slice all day. digger he dug. not knowing whats next
if he was gonna die, or just subside the pain.
blood dripped on the ground and down he went.

wishing his life was gone forever, never seeing himself again. but that day, his life turned gray, as he slowly wasted away.

<comment be honest it wasnt great but good enough>

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  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Okay I am gonna be brutally honest....
    OOOHHHHEEEMMMMGGGGEEE
    it is awesome, perfect and beautiful in a depressed morbid sort of way. what i mean is that you wrote it as great as it would possibly be

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