by Sparks Aug 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As she walks past him on the hill |
by Kayla
Wow.. this is such a beautiful and touching poem, I can see why it became one of the nominates for the poem contest. It makes you realize how one day you can have everything, be happy and in love.. but then in a split second all of that can be taken away from you. The two lines I loved the most in this poem is, |
by Wallace
Very good. That was so far the best poem I read today. Nice creativity. Excellent work. |
by Corruption
Great poem |
by oddi tea
Oh wow, the hurt is evident, the pain is sore, the bitter is tangible. It is such a sad poem! I was listening to Could've Been by Mandy Moore and the saddness nearly made me cry(and I don't cry for much of anything) a wonderful work of art. again a 5 |
I love da poem it is awesomeist lol |