Your poem is full of so many emotions, joy, fullfillment, sadness, hurt, pain....... it's very touching i love it x x x
please do read some of my poems and leave your otes and comments thank you

I love da poem it is awesomeist lol

Oh wow, the hurt is evident, the pain is sore, the bitter is tangible. It is such a sad poem! I was listening to Could've Been by Mandy Moore and the saddness nearly made me cry(and I don't cry for much of anything) a wonderful work of art. again a 5

Great poem
it has a romeo and juliet twist to it
except for the ending a bit
but good job
love it majorally

Keenan

Very good. That was so far the best poem I read today. Nice creativity. Excellent work.

Wow.. this is such a beautiful and touching poem, I can see why it became one of the nominates for the poem contest. It makes you realize how one day you can have everything, be happy and in love.. but then in a split second all of that can be taken away from you. The two lines I loved the most in this poem is,

"They hold hands on the mountainside
He falls madly in love, heart in his hand"

I just find that part to be very romantic.. like a young love, out exploring the woods and the mountains together. There's just one thing I didn't quite catch though.. what happened to the girl at the end of the poem? Anyways, great job!! I loved it, so detailed, organized, and heart touching.. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~