I loved this poem. kind of seems like my baby cousins lives but 2 survived but one didn't and he was only 6 months when his mom had put him on fire on july 11 2007 a day before he turned 7 months it happened in Iberia missouri of 8:30 of that same morning. he lied for 7 months but 21 days after he died he lost both of his ears his finger tips and his left leg. great poem keep up the great poem.

This poem is awesome. No critiques here.