Comments : I Feel

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    Beautiful,
    the flow was flawless.
    Yet, it would be nicer if you added more,
    description.
    Also punctuation would help,
    ALOT.
    For a poem without punctuation is like
    a song without a melody.
    Keep it up, I enjoyed it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful without a doubt! 5/5